On the 25/11/2016, I presented my wok to my peers and tutors for feedback. In this presentation I wanted to put more information in than the last presentation, as the main goal of the last presentation was to get opinions of an ending for the film, however this time I am wanting opinions on everything overall. This presentation focuses on what I am animating, why I am animating, and how I am animating the video and shows all the recent work I have created to back up my video. I also gave out a sample of my draft 8 script as well as my layout test, below is the presentation:
I felt that my presentation went much better this time in contrast to last time, I was more confident with my idea and conveyed it well to my peers. I got a few different opinions on Max's design, they were curious on whether he would have colour, shading, rough drawings behind or just a line character. This was because I have multiple drawings of Max in a variety of finished styles, it made me realize that I was unsure on how Max will be drawn in the video. Sarah suggested to have the animator draw the line art for Max, however once he springs to life he gets his shading. I feel that this would be a good way of conveying that he is not only alive but also drawn.
One other thing I got from the feedback was a few more referencing techniques, it was suggested to try and record myself drawing Max, to get a feel on how I myself actually draw Max. I will try this and compare it to how I have drawn Max in Flash.
Overall I am very pleased with the feedback I received, it was mainly positive and offered me some very good feedback, I will continue to produce my animation and I will begin to create my storyboards shortly.
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