While working on scene 4, I ran into a continuity issue. When we see May the Cat for the first time, she needs to notice Max the Cat, I had been unsure on how she should react when she sees him. I know that I want her to be somewhat 'disgusted' by his appearance, so she turns away, but I have been unsure about how she reacts to seeing him for the first time. I played with two emotions; annoyed and surprised:
Out of the two, I decided to go with surprised as it is the most believable one. I don't want May to come across as a cold character, I wanted her to be shocked by his appearance, rather than annoyed at his waving. I feel like Surprised will have an overall better effect as it shows that she isn't instantaneously cold towards Max.
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